Inspiring, this piece is the shizznit...On a felt tip, no doubt

[quote]One day the caterpillar will survive through all of life

Mos def, feelin this one yo...Stay up

Uh huh, feelin this no doubt, nicely written...very clean, very smooth

Makes you wanna frame it, felt!

Pz, licks

put that shit down yo! id love to hear this as audio

rhyme was sick, just like the peeps posted before me

uppin!!

pz, licks

Like whoa, that was dopeness with the mostess Repeat offender, defender of the universe Cursed since birth but I'm laid back and care-free for what it's worth I'd be surprised if I survived another ten years on this earth Bankrupt of life yet prodigal of ease Only when I'm fast asleep I see what no ...

holi moli, yes big indeed

but from what i read it was beautiful indeedy

if i had a dude writing like that over me id marry him

lucky ive found someone close enuff to that level ;)

stay up and i will definitely get to reading the entire thing

pz, licks

thanks dudes! hehe

and hope, it aint a phase baby - holla! lol :P

aw awesome, good lookin' out B

pz, licks

ha, yeah...im feelin' this

really liked the opener & ya finished it off sumthin' gold

niceness - i like the short but solid verses

stay up

pz, licks

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned And I am a woman to the fucking core Dishonesty churns my stomach When I am made to believe you are loyal and true but you aren't you will understand how much that kills me. There is nothing inside of me that loves you anymore And I did With every ounce of eve...

sex sells the best say coz its appealing, yes but i dont have to show my ass for attention, yes so girl why you on my back you got a problem with the company i pack the eyes say it all, she got it in for me she wears a cracked smile when im laughin whispers in the toilets "did you see her with.." i ...

sweet with a little 'g'

hehe, niceness yo...

pz

more tripped out than that lady singing at the ice hockey who forgot the words to the national anthem.

poor gurl, that was on our news down here so the shit mustve been
bad!

as for this written, short & sweet...just wat i was feeling
dope shit

pz

agreed^

exposing your soul brings life back to it

i felt the truth - keep up!

no on expected me to candy curse, the minister never blessed a bitch born under earth, they didnt see that rejection could be my drive, fuck a jump board if im already high, enough to boogie pose in thin air, so many questions where to begin?, staring and wondering wont get you here, so get over the...

im rotating her tissue picture, i made figure of this blushing angel now i pay with rebel rhymes, her face is purest formation of beauty fire we will always sample movements, but ill never be your mother desire my fingers yern to clean the dust, the pain treble that will hurt your trust if you find ...

made me wanna go on a hating spree yo! lol

but for serious, this was some dope writing. really felt the emotion
and aggression behind the words, got the imagery flavour too.

it seems you have alot to get off your chest.

keep up!

pz, licks

i really liked that, especially the 2nd verse
really stringed it along quite nicely - tight stuff

felt

pz, licks

shit was sick, dope dope dope

loved it - keep flowing hot kid

so I'm fully without anger when I go to hit the aim
split the gain, shit's the same, I'm weathered from tryin to change it
and when you paint your happy face it makes me dream of facelifts

ohhh hot damn, on fire. shit i was really feelin that flow! ahh, so refreshing to read some dope stuff. keep em comming.


p.s is this a song you got lined up? coz id love to hear that audio

go on, throw em rocks! lol

thanks alot hope, glad you digged it

stay up peoples :)

pz

your draining her water coloured smile stealing the jade from her champagne how much can i stand to understand why such grey mirrors reflect onto something so pure you pathetic piece of shit leave worthy gypsys to clean your pits why is it you refuse to accept you cannot move to future rents if your...

nice twist on this one hope, lol pretty cool

love i tells ya, it can be a fucking bitch

i want alot of what you want

sometimes i fall short of inspiration, thanks for pickin it up

stay up

:P thank-you very much cash

goodlookin out :)

beauty live fused standing on a stage im overwhelmed with praise my eyes cream in the delight of basslines created through flight to reach my inner soul thats been so cold, for so long i stopped myself from aching i stopped the force of acting because love isnt just one colour nor is it one person, ...

hey hon

was chubb rock like a doctor or a lawyer? im tryna think if he was the one i read an interview about, a long time ago about him going to college & becomming a scholar , hes like a real smart dude huh?

imagery was nice, i liked the content too. wikkid shit

yeah this had the niceness, flow was tight

definitely could feel this as audio

nice peepin!

pz

jaz :!: