CTR LEGACY THREAD

Kilgore786 · Post by **Kilgore786** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 4:46 am

You Green Day, wack raps claiming you human crack
I must be herion, cause mine show up on tracks

:jumpjoint::jumpjoint::jumpjoint:

The truths, I smack crews of rap and take medallions
So cats get they wig pushed back further than Rakim's album

:jumpjoint::jumpjoint::jumpjoint:
:jumpjoint::jumpjoint::jumpjoint:

Shit dawg, I ain't even gonna fuckwitit...

Ain't feelin even close to that clever right now

Reason · Post by **Reason** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 7:31 pm

had to step up cuz people are sucking you
i'm about to put this magneto in a rubber room
he ain't keystyling, he's remaking his own misses
yo i watched the x-men, how come magneto never gets bitches?
your verse is a medley, that's shady and shifty
your favorite combination is shift-c and shift-v
you never once sit in a cell but you acting like you sick like you had sickle cell but you a snitch like a bitch who tells
you're corny, you ain't thorough
you sound like you should make a mixtape and claim a borough

Reason · Post by **Reason** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 7:33 pm

all people are a part of a huge mix
and you

Gregg Popabitch1 · Post by **Gregg Popabitch1** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 7:34 pm

other then the wig pushed back like so and so's album (which has been done 2 million times), mag's got fresh stuff. hot.

AND BOOOOOOOOOOOO @ recycling. i seen you do the tyrone lue line before as well.

Mo Cheeks · Post by **Mo Cheeks** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 10:07 pm

Magneto wrote:
Moe Cheeks wrote:
Magneto wrote:
Moe Cheeks wrote:
Magneto wrote:||
A, I treat this dude like Tyronne Lue
Shoot directly in your face, then walk right over you

:idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot:

damn dawg you bit that line somethin serious
????? That's one of my old lines....
my bad you might even be the same cat that I read this from one time over at Sohh.com

my fault
You mean Mr. Sam? That's me...

haha no shit!! my bad man for real. Dope writing, keep it moving

Magneto · Post by **Magneto** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 10:11 pm

reason is yellow wrote:had to step up cuz people are sucking you
i'm about to put this magneto in a rubber room
he ain't keystyling, he's remaking his own misses
yo i watched the x-men, how come magneto never gets bitches?
your verse is a medley, that's shady and shifty
your favorite combination is shift-c and shift-v
you never once sit in a cell but you acting like you sick like you had sickle cell but you a snitch like a bitch who tells
you're corny, you ain't thorough
you sound like you should make a mixtape and claim a borough

When I draw it's a Portait of Blues like Lou Rawls
I spray rounds you break out like pool balls
So be cool, for I get foul with these sick verbs
I got freestyles that come off the dome like Nick Berg
You spit words, and type ill, but I'm the nicest with the rhyme still
You a Kobe Bryant rapper trying to get your mic/mike skills
You tell tails about how Magneto don't get the bush please
Just cause you fucking pussy opposite AC Green
Don't mean you fucking a pussy, get what I mean?
Cause these sick themes, got heads coming awake like a wet dream
So when the imf-beam, leave your whole team steamed
Who's gonna get the street and sidewalk clean
Cause my killings like directors outtakes, never make a scene
You flow I bypass like Len Bias, so don't try shit
And niggaz die quick, so people in Philaflava please
Try to get money back like C.O.D.s, cause I spit under sleeves
And I suggest you stress these words like D.O.C.
NUCCKA

Magneto · Post by **Magneto** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 10:12 pm

Moe Cheeks wrote:
Magneto wrote:
Moe Cheeks wrote:
Magneto wrote:
Moe Cheeks wrote: A, I treat this dude like Tyronne Lue
Shoot directly in your face, then walk right over you

:idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot:

damn dawg you bit that line somethin serious
????? That's one of my old lines....
my bad you might even be the same cat that I read this from one time over at Sohh.com

my fault
You mean Mr. Sam? That's me...
haha no shit!! my bad man for real. Dope writing, keep it moving

hahaha no doubt.

Magneto · Post by **Magneto** » Thu Dec 30, 2004 10:16 pm

Nice shiit. Your multis are ill.

That repeating line thing was sick.

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Fri Dec 31, 2004 1:45 am

so many death threats sent in my direction I should be dead
but instead i use my head lyricly spitin flows from my dome piece
ho please.. kno believe! im stickin ya ho under neath yo sheets
fast like yoshi.... but mostly da motion stays at a slow freak
lookin at both cheeks... followin da outline of a gods physiques
smokin leak... fuckin wit dat sauce nigga but its neva weak
every other week...i seek a sac cause a savage gots ta peak
my minds more tore back then a whores crusty cunt crack
hit it wit no hat...pssshhh tragic?... survivein AIDS like "Magic"
my Johnsons...long so bitches can swing on it like Tarzan
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... be sound of a hos mouf wide open
aint no jokein strokein my bloke till the skeets chokein a hOHH
hurd a notches... my super skeet soaker murders be otches

Tariq's Dilemma · Post by **Tariq's Dilemma** » Fri Dec 31, 2004 8:19 pm

Yo, its tariq and its time to bring a new dilemma
i make your girls pussy wet why you just a bed wetter
home of the best cheddar, word to cabot
your diss' do nothin to nobody/like HIV to magic
hey neato, his names magneto,
his rhymes gives us reason for free shots like a free-throw
but you do stop stop the show monkey, you ain't cee-lo
now if you excuse me, i got to expose
pussy
because I pick out hoes like boogers in my nose

DUNNY

Bring Back The Tempo · Sat Jan 01, 2005 5:48 pm

a lot of memorable lines but didn't particularly like the sequence of "mine", "grime", "fine" type-a-rhymes. But overall, it''s good and isn't too much of a multi overkill.

hired gun · Post by **hired gun** » Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:25 am

money on the thoroughbred
borough head of brooklyn
impervious to smokin lead
on smash like crack cookin
pro-ked pre-school rappers they get done
they girls watch me drop balls like january 1
fantasy players couldn't stack up my numbers
hired gun stay on the case like Rick hunter
bombs blow up your space it ain't safe in bunkers
Y'all only hot wearin wool sweaters in the summer,
so you enema'd assed out wit that shitty flow
more desperate then housewives on abc's show
days of our lives drama the way you rock mics
don't even throw the hands, or end up like the great white hype

360 · Post by **360** » Wed Jan 05, 2005 3:46 pm

lmao at some of the lines in here. good shit fellas

360 · Post by **360** » Wed Jan 05, 2005 3:49 pm

good shit man.

360 · Post by **360** » Wed Jan 05, 2005 3:51 pm

this was cool. the schemes were nice. some of the liens were hot, aswell.

peace

360 · Post by **360** » Wed Jan 05, 2005 3:55 pm

this was crazy. definately felt the choice of wording.

PoetryInMotion · Post by **PoetryInMotion** » Wed Jan 05, 2005 5:46 pm

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Thu Jan 06, 2005 7:03 pm

pulled the plug, went swimmin down the drain
we hurt the ones we love to alleviate the pain
......burned a rose cause I was seein red
it's either back to work, back to art, or back to bed
I wanna see a dead dove wake up so I can kill it
feelin like I'm fallin cause of carryin the villiage
dividin all the plus and minus multiplys my grimace
cash, fame, flash frame, click delete the image
Timmy got some big plans, on the gimme, gimme
but don't make no cents(sense) like fat chicks with small titties
actin all giddy..........it's an epidemic
mixin on the brain like comic books for chemists
its all academic.........let the fire walk with you
down that thin line where I write my name in scar tissue
I'm tryin to hold up and make it big like wonder bras
but I can't stick to it like magnets in a lumberyard
there's blood on my hands, I know how a broken heart tastes
holed up in a dark place, showin off my shark face
it's holdin me down and it won't stop the madness
hold me up cause I'm fallin, don't hold me up to your standards

PHRO 1 · Post by **PHRO 1** » Fri Jan 07, 2005 1:32 pm

oh shit this was the fucking illist shit i ever seen from you !!!
where to start ?
BACK TO WORK , BACK TO ART , OR BACK TO BED javascript:emoticon(':mrgreen:')
i s that set to music yet i would bump that shit in my olds
i can see my self printing this and reading it to myself like a prayer

PS HAM IS GOOD FOOD

foiegras · Post by **foiegras** » Fri Jan 07, 2005 6:56 pm

srriously man, that shit was real ill. the flow was real consitent and didn't feel like it wa forced at all. just real solid overall. piece.

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Fri Jan 07, 2005 7:00 pm

thanks for the peep, guys

foiegras · Post by **foiegras** » Fri Jan 07, 2005 7:01 pm

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Fri Jan 07, 2005 7:08 pm

that is absolutely fuckin crazy. so much imagery. it told that story with none of the standing on a soap box preachiness I'm used to from poets. it was more like reflecting, and telling a friend a story while passing a blunt back and forth on a comfortable couch. props.

BayAreaHustla408 · Post by **BayAreaHustla408** » Fri Jan 07, 2005 11:28 pm

make em say UUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...shit was throwed

Nowell's Soul · Post by **Nowell's Soul** » Sat Jan 08, 2005 2:55 am

Sick, every line works like its supposed to.

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:59 am

yeah this had the niceness, flow was tight

definitely could feel this as audio

nice peepin!

pz

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Sat Jan 08, 2005 12:02 pm

imagery was nice, i liked the content too. wikkid shit

remixture · Post by **remixture** » Sat Jan 08, 2005 3:29 pm

this piece was fiyyah...my favorite bit was:

there's blood on my hands, I know how a broken heart tastes
holed up in a dark place, showin off my shark face
it's holdin me down and it won't stop the madness
hold me up cause I'm fallin, don't hold me up to your standards

Nowell's Soul · Post by **Nowell's Soul** » Sat Jan 08, 2005 5:04 pm

Rewritten parts are in red...

I wondered whether we were just in it for fun
We have sex, and play, and wrestle, and run.
And when the night comes up and the day dies slow,
We do what we want and we starve for more.
So when I live sometimes I don't even breathe
I live life like it's just another disease.

And when we look around I forget that I can't see a thing
I realize that my goals don't meet up with my dreams.
I try to forget the hopeless in all of this,
How I just wake up and end up in the same place.
Let me lie down, my lifeless smile won't inspire much of anything
It always seems like I'm falling and I don't have wings.

I see things that I never even wanted to see,
I write words that I never wanted to be.
It's like home is a place I don't even recognize.
And yeah, it's familar but I carry a disguise.
I keep my thoughts buried underneath my bed,
Sometimes they show up and I ask them to leave.

I only want things that I'll never have
It couldn't be any worse, things just seem that bad.
I try and whistle every now and then but I don't make a sound
I bleed my thoughts and they kill everything on the ground.
I see the sun come down beneath my feet
But everytime I see it I just want it to leave.

I drifted off on a hope, that will lead me nowhere
I can't swim, if I drown, nobody's gonna care.
Not even you, right here, you'll forget about me
When you're reminded, you'll just whisper, "Who's he?"
I jump up sometimes and but I can't seem to fly
The way things are going, I should not even try..

So I sleep all day but I've lost my dreams
When I get lost I'm always somewhere I don't want to be.
I see things I know, but I've got nothing to share,
And if you want what I've got, I will give it to you
I value nothing in this life cause nothing's really beautiful.
I whisper to the wind, I see my voice fly away
It'll come back in the future, I hope, someday.

I have a goal that I don't even want to achieve
I can't even tell if I'm the least bit free.
I hide in the corners where the darkness grows,
I see nothingness and some other things I know.
They say I make everything worse than it is
Maybe I do, but it's all I really know how to do..

I've got too many thoughts and nothing to do,
So I wonder all day about how I've got nothing to lose.
I get most of my joy from the tears I cry,
I don't really appreciate my life.
Sometimes I do, but then the feeling fades
I realize there's no color, there's just blue's and gray's.

I don't want to see things that make my stomach drop,
I want knowledge in my brain, and a spark in my heart.
I might never see what I want to see,
Because I've got blinders on, and it goes too deep.
I saw ghosts they spooked and then ran away
They told me life's just like marching in a parade...

So I'll try to lead, I'll fly, and then I'll float,
On a big old balloon and a parachute.
I'll never fall cause like I said, I've got nothing to lose.
But that doesn't mean, someday, I won't have it all
I'll have love in my soul and the world in my palm.
I'm bleeding, but I can't find the wound, so I must be cursed
When you've got nothing on your mind, just hope for the worst.

Peace

axel foley · Post by **axel foley** » Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:13 pm

:shock:

i liked this man. i think like this sometimes; i try not to but everyone gets those days. the mood oozes of apathy, complacency, and mediocrity. i dunno, i'ma have to read this again. i liked this a lot though man. stay up.

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