CTR LEGACY THREAD

360 · Post by **360** » Sun Jan 09, 2005 6:32 pm

this was cool. definately wasnt the illest i read from u like some of the above stated but was definately proper.

360 · Post by **360** » Sun Jan 09, 2005 6:33 pm

vivid stuff. dope combionation of stories. always feeling ya joints.

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Mon Jan 10, 2005 12:50 pm

good stuff, Nowell.

hired gun · Post by **hired gun** » Mon Jan 10, 2005 1:44 pm

^^^

what that man said. feel that.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Mon Jan 10, 2005 4:02 pm

This was really, really dope Remix. Good to see you been putting it down, even through the holidays.

Props.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Mon Jan 10, 2005 4:04 pm

Uh huh. That's what I'm talkin' 'bout.

Keep smashin' Nowell...This was ill...real..."dreamy" feel to this...kind of like you could float on it. Dope shit.

360 · Post by **360** » Mon Jan 10, 2005 5:46 pm

this was ok. not really that fly, though. well, not as ill as other pieces ive read from u. also, u would say one thing in one section and then contradict it with a line in an other section. thats cool if u intended to do it. i dont know, seems like u didnt put your all into this one.

Jennie C · Post by **Jennie C** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 12:58 am

Nowell's Soul wrote: So I sleep all day and like I've lost my wings
When I get lost I'm always just a little bit scared
I see things I know, but I've got nothing to share,
And if you want what I've got, I'll surely give it to you
I value nothing in this life cause nothing's really beautiful.
I whisper to the wind, I see my voice fly away
It'll come back in the future, I hope, someday.

WOW and double WOW. I thought this was incredible, and the above part sums up exactly how I'm feeling these days.

Great work, thanks for sharing. It's nice to know you're not stuck here alone sometimes.

Nowell's Soul · Post by **Nowell's Soul** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 4:34 am

axel foley wrote::shock:

i liked this man. i think like this sometimes; i try not to but everyone gets those days. the mood oozes of apathy, complacency, and mediocrity. i dunno, i'ma have to read this again. i liked this a lot though man. stay up.

Thanks for checking, axel. I'm glad you picked up on the mood, because it goes back and forth so much.

BeHemoth wrote:good stuff, Nowell.

Thanks for always checkin', homie.

hired gun wrote:^^^

what that man said. feel that.

Props. My favorite thing about the feedback on this board, is that it all comes from other dope writers.

HopeLess wrote:Uh huh. That's what I'm talkin' 'bout.

Keep smashin' Nowell...This was ill...real..."dreamy" feel to this...kind of like you could float on it. Dope shit.

Much appreciated, man. You also fall into the comment mentioned above.

360 wrote:this was ok. not really that fly, though. well, not as ill as other pieces ive read from u. also, u would say one thing in one section and then contradict it with a line in an other section. thats cool if u intended to do it. i dont know, seems like u didnt put your all into this one.

I totally understand what you're talking about. All writing could benefit from some solid revisions, there are some holes I should fill in, it's cool to drop feedback even if you aren't feeling it completely.

Jen wrote:
Nowell's Soul wrote: So I sleep all day and like I've lost my wings
When I get lost I'm always just a little bit scared
I see things I know, but I've got nothing to share,
And if you want what I've got, I'll surely give it to you
I value nothing in this life cause nothing's really beautiful.
I whisper to the wind, I see my voice fly away
It'll come back in the future, I hope, someday.
WOW and double WOW. I thought this was incredible, and the above part sums up exactly how I'm feeling these days.

Great work, thanks for sharing. It's nice to know you're not stuck here alone sometimes.

Thank you, the fact you can relate puts things in perspective for me, writing these pieces as well. Stay up Jen.

Evenstar · Post by **Evenstar** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 7:27 am

Flow was there and I could picture it being delivered but the repitition in the piece about how you live was annoying to me, almost like the repitition of a gangsta rapper talking about his grill. The rest of the piece was straight though, a simple rhyme scheme kept that "dreamy" feel that was mentioned earlier, and you managed to be reflective and deep without becoming too abstract.

remixture · Post by **remixture** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:16 pm

Good stuff...keep on rockin the boards

Kilgore786 · Post by **Kilgore786** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 2:58 am

Kilgore786 · Post by **Kilgore786** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:07 am

BeHemoth wrote:Timmy got some big plans, on the gimme, gimme
but don't make no cents(sense) like fat chicks with small titties
actin all giddy..........

:jumpjoint:

its all academic.........let the fire walk with you
down that thin line where I write my name in scar tissue

:jumpjoint:

i'm tryin to hold up and make it big like wonder bras
but I can't stick to it like magnets in a lumberyard
there's blood on my hands, I know how a broken heart tastes
holed up in a dark place, showin off my shark face
it's holdin me down and it won't stop the madness
hold me up cause I'm fallin, don't hold me up to your standards

:jumpjoint::jumpjoint::jumpjoint:

that was really good.

Kilgore786 · Post by **Kilgore786** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:11 am

wrd...

thnks yal

arlene · Post by **arlene** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 9:11 am

Kilgore you borderline insulted the dude

BeHemoth, your writing is :rockon:

hired gun · Post by **hired gun** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 11:00 am

very very hot.

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 12:59 pm

that intro made me smile. "distortion pedal to the metal" is fire.

does this have a chorus and are there other people on the track? cause if not this can definitely be an entire song and I would like to see what comes of it.

PHRO 1 · Post by **PHRO 1** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 2:11 pm

yes that first part was more on point , than the end was , but i like kilgores style , fresh n clean

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 2:38 pm

ha "cool"

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 9:50 pm

Sick as always mayn.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 9:55 pm

SOmethign undeniable dope and stylish about this. That's fresh dawg. Real fresh.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 10:01 pm

I'm mourning what we lost inside the core of rhymin'
cause I lost good friends in the midst of what we glorifyin'
bein

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 10:41 pm

The priest made me do it
the dutiful priest with beautiful niece
i i pursued her to the pew where she sang hymns on beautiful knees
but truly it seems that she

PoetryInMotion · Post by **PoetryInMotion** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 11:42 pm

:shock: GOOOOOOD SHIT

Kilgore786 · Post by **Kilgore786** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 11:57 pm

that's a super sick piece...

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 12:05 am

i just shmoked a blunt fa dis piece

arlene · Post by **arlene** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 12:06 am

Outta control!!!

PHRO 1 · Post by **PHRO 1** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 1:07 pm

the whole thing was on point ,
started running like a joint
ill just ill

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 1:26 pm

I'm mos def diggin this one.

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 1:29 pm

Hopeless wrote:I'll wear black for Johnny Cash, I'll be the man in black for rap

I believe you.

good shit meng.

CTR LEGACY THREAD

Re: Just Hope for the Worst

Re: Just Hope for the Worst

White Devil

Re: Straw Villages

The Man In Black (Part 1)

the priest made me do it (the beautiful princess)