mushroom capped out mad hatter with fat boom bap patterns no

M:akai · Post by **M:akai** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 1:56 pm

doubt

check it, and lemme have it

www.zebox.com/teeto2

bizzlestiltskin · Post by **bizzlestiltskin** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 7:35 pm

I like the vibe you were going for on this beat but I think you could make it work a little bit better with one change.

The little flute that comes in right before the sample loops is cool but it doesn't match the notes of the other samples. It sounds discordant because of this. it would flow so much better to me if it matched up with the other sounds.

the guitar that pops up does so a little bit too abrubtly for my tastes, maybe slowly raise the volume of it or something, i don't know.

The changeup is tight, I like that right there.

M:akai · Post by **M:akai** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 11:44 pm

thanks for peeping, ya, i feel ya, i just listened to it again with rested ears and i can definitely hear something not harmonizing, i think i was too amped on the drums when i was makin it, lol

i'ma tidy this up...any feed on this rough appreciated though

Hasenfefer · Post by **Hasenfefer** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:12 pm

ha drums are pretty tight...could use a little tweeking as bizzle said. overall it was moody though...dig the vibe.

M:akai · Post by **M:akai** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 7:49 am

ok i changed it a lot, there's i think 5 changes now, i dunno if i like the craziness between or not, but check this now, its unlike anything else i've made :?: :!: :idea: :mrgreen:

www.zebox.com/teeto2

Sherlock · Post by **Sherlock** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 11:25 am

loving the drums

nice bass

diggin this beat man

around 1:29 though
that high pictch thing that comes in and gets higher..
hurts my ears

thats my only complaint..
this beat is really dope

ethyOne · Post by **ethyOne** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 2:52 pm

I like this, or most of it, not lovin the bass. But that snare... beautiful

But well... i

bizzlestiltskin · Post by **bizzlestiltskin** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 5:36 pm

i think you touched it up quite nicely. no more discordant samples, and it sounds way better. nice work man.

Raphael De La Ghetto · Sat Jan 22, 2005 12:03 am

this is m:akai

thanks for the feed, much appreciated, i think ur right about the bass, it was way too loud when i mixed it down so i jus compressed the fuck out of it and it sounds kinda fuct, it's being taken care of

werd

CHANCE RANDOM · Post by **CHANCE RANDOM** » Mon Jan 31, 2005 4:34 am

very good, very good. i like how the beat develops a lot, and the sounds you used work well with eachother. props on this, i like it a bunch. specially around the four minute mark with all the different instruments. chaotic goodness.

tayoisnt · Post by **tayoisnt** » Tue Feb 08, 2005 11:06 pm

wrinkles - this BUMPS homie. sounds like a jj brown throwaway, and i mean that in the best way possible. had me rhyming as soon as the drums dropped in earnest. great beat for an MC, very easy to listen to. the rolls are natural and fucking cool as all get out. the static and squeal that form the transition feel kinda superfluous, but when everything falls back in place, it was worth it. for some reason, your drums swing along like early rj. and i envy that. good shit dude, definitely, good shit.