i told yaHopeLess wrote:Damn...hardly anyone's dropped anything. What the deal, yo?
Guess they really wanna go back to back to back real quick and shit.
deadlines will be extended or this field is about to get cut real short
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Galvatron78 wrote:I wanna put my head up Irina's skirt and say a Das Efx verse.
Galvatron78 wrote:I wanna put my head up Irina's skirt and say a Das Efx verse.
alright we goin preschool cause ya kno ya shit aint equalHopeLess wrote:Shade A Grade F, how dare you step...you suck
Ya lame name's fittin, cause you ain't even a cut
Barely kNickin' a brother you barely even bust
a tinkerbell monster sprinklin' some fairy dust
A brat too big for his britches...I'm smackin' you up
I'm a Prodigy son, you startin' fires you can't snuff
You like a fag smackin' Tyson,
a gnat tryin' to land on the sun
you wouldn't bust hot shit if I hand you a gun
and veryone knows you Shade A's illegitimate son
so make like a ghost, better yet Jada and Run...
So...slow ya role this just another li'l chump Hope will end
You ain't really sick bitch, you more like Nickalodeon
You bout as ill as vacine, as mean as a mutt with rubber teeth
spittin' hard lines when squish like vasaline
I don't have to get real to dismantle ya dome
this ain't nick at nite, you more like david the gnome
But you ain't worth shit Nicky, get swiftly torn apart
Come back when you get grown, we know you afarid of the dark
actually fucker it took very little time for me to make a post saying that my raps are better than yours, so slow your roll.Evenstar wrote:If smithee had spent as much time tearing at hopeless as he did bragging on himself he might have won this.
man, what the fuck ever...That florida line was sick, other than that.. it wasn't much to read
Moolah wrote::cheers:Smithee wrote:I'd like to personally thank Andrew Bogut.
actually it was...for reference,Evenstar wrote:lol, the amount of time it took you wasn't in question,
If smithee had spent as much time tearing at hopeless as he did bragging on himself he might have won this.
ok.however long it took you should have spent the whole time attacking your opponent..
I never said u voted solely to hate on me...but thnx, tho.don't hate on me because you got merced.. hell don't even count my vote if you think I was hating on you.. you'll lose with or without i
Moolah wrote::cheers:Smithee wrote:I'd like to personally thank Andrew Bogut.
unfortunately that is probably a correct assessment. "flow" is something that is overrated in text battles (not to me at all - i try to make my shit flow at all times)...but really, who else but those who actually do flow and rap can appreciate the flow rollin off the tongue when reading it???Allan Smithee wrote: anyway, thnx to everyone else who left feedback. I thought my 1st verse was pretty dope, tho. needed more punchlines maybe? :so?: