Ciara "Oh (Cadence Weapon Smart Bomb Remix)"

The Iron Sheik · Post by **The Iron Sheik** » Tue May 10, 2005 6:04 pm

http://www.cadenceweapon.com/audio/Ciar ... Remix).mp3

i'll hit up maybe 10 other people when i get home from work, i think. i'm in that kind of mood. let me know your thoughts.

Hasenfefer · Post by **Hasenfefer** » Tue May 10, 2005 6:15 pm

really dark and gothic sounding...almost on some NIN steez. i think it needs some more variations during the sections...i keep waiting for it to build and it doesnt.

Henessee Williams · Post by **Henessee Williams** » Tue May 10, 2005 6:16 pm

t u r b o

uber mega ultra t u r b o

The Iron Sheik · Post by **The Iron Sheik** » Tue May 10, 2005 6:27 pm

Hasenfefer wrote:really dark and gothic sounding...almost on some NIN steez. i think it needs some more variations during the sections...i keep waiting for it to build and it doesnt.

i had lots of changes, but variations in what regard?

mor · Post by **mor** » Tue May 10, 2005 7:23 pm

yeah i agree with it needing a simple build up. the synths are really harsh on her voice. i like her voice on a dark beat though, good idea creatively, just needs some work.

still illiterate · Post by **still illiterate** » Wed May 11, 2005 3:27 am

at times i think this is a bit too empty. then the synths come in, and i'm just not feeling it with the vocals. there are too many sounds on this. honestly this just isn't my style.
No disrespect to you or anything cause i can respect what you do, and the fact that it's different, but usually you're stuff is a bit too chaotic and harsh for my sensitive ears. so take that into account with my critique, i'm not your target audience.

Hasenfefer · Post by **Hasenfefer** » Thu May 12, 2005 7:59 pm

The Iron Sheik wrote:
Hasenfefer wrote:really dark and gothic sounding...almost on some NIN steez. i think it needs some more variations during the sections...i keep waiting for it to build and it doesnt.
i had lots of changes, but variations in what regard?

the intro and first section seems to build to me, but by the time luda's verse comes in it never quite grew to where i thought it would. i was kind of hoping you'd flip the drums up at some point and drop a nasty double-time pattern...but maybe it's just my producers mind always imagining what i would do. so take it with a grain of salt.

The Iron Sheik · Post by **The Iron Sheik** » Thu May 12, 2005 8:13 pm

Hasenfefer wrote:
The Iron Sheik wrote:
Hasenfefer wrote:really dark and gothic sounding...almost on some NIN steez. i think it needs some more variations during the sections...i keep waiting for it to build and it doesnt.
i had lots of changes, but variations in what regard?
the intro and first section seems to build to me, but by the time luda's verse comes in it never quite grew to where i thought it would. i was kind of hoping you'd flip the drums up at some point and drop a nasty double-time pattern...but maybe it's just my producers mind always imagining what i would do. so take it with a grain of salt.

fuck that's what i was thinking, drum change-ups. i wanted to keep a more militant pacing and have my drum shifts be in the form of random effects (echoed clap, the line of kicks). i feel you, thanks for mentioning that.

Henessee Williams · Post by **Henessee Williams** » Fri May 13, 2005 11:59 am

The Iron Sheik wrote:
Hasenfefer wrote:
The Iron Sheik wrote:
Hasenfefer wrote:really dark and gothic sounding...almost on some NIN steez. i think it needs some more variations during the sections...i keep waiting for it to build and it doesnt.
i had lots of changes, but variations in what regard?
the intro and first section seems to build to me, but by the time luda's verse comes in it never quite grew to where i thought it would. i was kind of hoping you'd flip the drums up at some point and drop a nasty double-time pattern...but maybe it's just my producers mind always imagining what i would do. so take it with a grain of salt.
fuck that's what i was thinking, drum change-ups. i wanted to keep a more militant pacing and have my drum shifts be in the form of random effects (echoed clap, the line of kicks). i feel you, thanks for mentioning that.

I agree. I thought when Luda came in you were gonna just drop some grimey drums and bring all that tetinous bass to the fore.
I like your beats though, shit is real gutteral...keeps you on your toes.

skope my joints on here now....let me know what you think

Captin Planit · Post by **Captin Planit** » Sun May 15, 2005 10:31 pm

Whoa... I like this dungeon shit... but could still be murkier. Drum change-ups would be really appreciated. And I feel like you need some more life behind that stiff movement. The really plodding nature of the track is great, but when that's all you've got to offer, it gets tired quickly. Still like what you've done with this shit.

tayoisnt · Post by **tayoisnt** » Sat May 21, 2005 11:13 pm

ah. this is that gotdamn.

the noises in your head make me nervous, they sound like they push you around, in front of things.

this shit KNOCKS though. seriously, i tend to chase the red, and this shit sounds fucking marvelous with a little extra buzz circling the whole deal.

the main section, feedback pulse and chugalug drums work really fucking well. but i'm with has 'n 'em, if the kicks started stutterstepping in spots, it'd be a-game material.

good money homie.