New Shit I have Been working on

Website · Post by **Random Sample** » Thu Sep 15, 2005 12:19 pm

Just started putting together this joint. Still needs to be tweaked some and some other stuff done to it, but this a rough copy. Just wanted to get some feedback on it.

http://www.awakingnightmare.com/randoms ... w_beat.mp3

agent b · Post by **agent b** » Thu Sep 15, 2005 12:35 pm

yo i was really feelin this, props

love the drum pattern and the samples, the track has a dope bounce to it, like a vicious battle rap type feel

it feels a little thin though, like the track doesn't have enough weight to it but it could just be the way it was mixed.

good shit

Website · Post by **Random Sample** » Thu Sep 15, 2005 1:38 pm

agent B wrote:yo i was really feelin this, props

love the drum pattern and the samples, the track has a dope bounce to it, like a vicious battle rap type feel

it feels a little thin though, like the track doesn't have enough weight to it but it could just be the way it was mixed.

good shit

Yeah it is a shitty recording to minidisc, then through a shitty sound card. You can't really hear the bass line. I still got to do a lot more to it.

Hasenfefer · Post by **Hasenfefer** » Thu Sep 15, 2005 1:58 pm

http://www.philaflava.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=18674

anomaly · Post by **anomaly** » Sat Sep 17, 2005 10:54 pm

the hihats seems a little too loud. not to say that you are a beginner producer, but the mark of most beginners is riding the hihat too loud in the mix.

i like the sample, except that horn-sound seems off key. try tuning it up.

SkylarjohnsoN · Post by **SkylarjohnsoN** » Sun Sep 18, 2005 9:02 pm

I think I'd like to hold off my response til I hear a better mix...

Website · Post by **Random Sample** » Tue Sep 20, 2005 10:53 am

yeah the oboe was off and I fixed that, and the mix is just shitty, I will be reupping a new version tomorrow.

SkylarjohnsoN · Post by **SkylarjohnsoN** » Tue Sep 20, 2005 9:11 pm

Yeah, the thing is it sounds allright right now but there's potential for it to sound way better...so whenever it's re-upped I'll listen again.

ANT8U · Post by **ANT8U** » Wed Sep 21, 2005 2:47 am

no bass atall.

but it sounds nice mann'.

i got my subwoofer on 10 and theres no output

The Red Scare · Post by **The Red Scare** » Wed Sep 21, 2005 10:44 am

i think this is a very solid start, but the mix needs a lot of work. i don't think there is nearly enough low end. you should make the bass thump and the drums hit a lot harder... then this could be a banger. all the samples you use (besides the offkey oboe which you fixed) work great.

so keep it up man, and post the track again when its updated

peace.