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Post by Liger Woods »

really not sure about this beat...i was really bobbing my head to it feeling myself. but now iono.


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Post by citizen »

right off, the claps need to be deeper i think, they are either pitched too high or need to be layered with a fuller clap sound or a snare or tamb or somethin

i like the changeup, i didnt see it coming but it transitioned nicely, i dunno about that vocal sample, sounds like he is saying dont sell...the pitch and feel of it work, but the actual voice of the guy(?) seems really weird

i think the main melodies/the guitar need to be brought out more, they should be the thing you hear the most rather than blending or being in the background like they are

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Post by ardamus »

the melodies of the track itself is dope. some different stuff. real calm and relaxing sound. those drums need some work though. i dig the 808 effect but it sounds like they're missing something.
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Post by deepfriedjellol »

yeah, i like the background shit alot
but the bass drums sounds like cardboard and the clap is way too "in stereo" crispy so crispy

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Post by Liger Woods »

^^^^^

word guys....all of that is real talk.

i don't fuck with beats too hard i just know the basics on how to make them. and when i do fuck with beats i usually don't use these kind of samples which a duran duran jumpoff inspired by the 80's beat battle thread. usually, i know what needs help on my beats but with this i knew somethin needed to be changed i just didn't know what cuz i'm not used to fuckin with shit like this.

so it was really appreciated.

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Post by Piff Tannen »

i think thats dope, definitely make the high hats deeper and maybe beef up the drums a little? the vocal sample does sound weird, i mean, it matches, but its just weird. but yeah, thats all i can really say, the sample was fresh, props on flippin some duran duran, i wanted to fucks with that Rio track in the beat battle pack, but i decided to stay away from it

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Post by cornsnake »

man, if it was summr i'd drive on that one at night. yeah Duran kinda sounds special olympics but hey. i guess a little rza-fication of the drums would be cool

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Post by cornsnake »

here it is. kanye the vocal, rza the drums and it would ride day and night.
thats a cool beat

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Post by dirtybird »

I like it---i got a couple Duran Duran vinyl laying around--haven't sampled off it yet--but I like the eighties feel-- I don't especially like the clap, but that's just my opinion- good work

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Post by LiQuiD6 »

im liking the drums....im really not crazy about the sample....something about it just doesnt pull everything together for me....its a pretty uninteresting sample imo..im not a big fan of the sample change up either..overall its def not a bad beat but could be better with other synths or something spicing it up....
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Post by Tack-Fu »

Some producers love the hand clap sound.

A producer friend of mine "Jethro" who does all the musical arrangements and recording for the "Bad Fathers" loves the hand clap.

Me? Not so much. So if we worked on a track together (not very often...he's not the type to colab with others) we found a middle ground by using a wood sound kind'a hit and the hand clap blended together. It would sound nice. It would'nt need echo effects and all that mess either.

Don't laugh...but I kind'a like Duran Duran also. I'd never use their work unless they paid me for a re-mix. But hey...do your thing.
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Post by tayoisnt »

hm. or. ergh. this really doesn't do much for me. i keep waiting for it to...i dunno, matter? it straddles the fence between completely shitty and extraordinarily interesting; as it stands though, it's just kinda there. re-work it, bump it up a couple bpms. make it shuffle as opposed to stretch, and y'might could attach some relevance to this jawn.

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