Here is my demo/ep originally recorded and released locally in 07, remastered in 09, and rereleased by the Spanish Netlabel Tres Catorce this month.
Versive - The Demonstration
The Demonstration
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You need to relax. You've got bars, but you are far too over the top and all over the place throughout the tracks that I have no idea who the hell you are. I don't like that. And frankly... most of the production just feels incredibly amateurish. The beat makes track 3 IMMEDIATELY unlistenable. In fact, your boy Devamps is pretty terrible across the board and hurts your album. Miserable drums, track after track.
Your music is not dark enough to carry your conspiracy theorist angle.
You should've had your boy Architeck do the whole album. But even a lot of his stuff needs work. Again, a lot of your lyrics are pretty solid, but your flow runs the gamut between overly earnest to painful.
And that's that.
Your music is not dark enough to carry your conspiracy theorist angle.
You should've had your boy Architeck do the whole album. But even a lot of his stuff needs work. Again, a lot of your lyrics are pretty solid, but your flow runs the gamut between overly earnest to painful.
And that's that.
