CTR LEGACY THREAD

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Wed Dec 15, 2004 7:42 pm

so far your styles repetitive dog, I voted no for this one.

PoetryInMotion · Post by **PoetryInMotion** » Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:20 pm

Dam Hard Crowd. Its Nice Though. Always Room For Improvement. Thx For The Reminder

360 · Post by **360** » Thu Dec 16, 2004 7:17 am

its no hatred, homie, u wanted the truth and we're giving it to u. i think u want constructive critiscism so all i can really say is try to come up with diferent ways to say shit, invent some slang, use some metaphores, make the rhyme scheme a bit more intricate.

peace.

Mike (NJJ) · Post by **Mike (NJJ)** » Thu Dec 16, 2004 4:20 pm

I like this for the simple fact that a poll option was, "it's straight sick"...I mean, hey.

I do agree with the others though, some more versatile subject matter would spice up your rhymes.

PoetryInMotion · Post by **PoetryInMotion** » Thu Dec 16, 2004 7:50 pm

I Like The Honesty. Havent Had That In A While. I Ride A Short Fuse Sometimes So If My Shit Gets To Fuckin Crazy. Deal With It.

But after Readin Some Shit On Here I Dont Think I Have To Worry. Fuck YA

M:akai · Post by **M:akai** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 3:36 pm

PoetryInMotion wrote: My Ass Cant Be Tamed.

remixture · Post by **remixture** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:13 pm

You know, she usually gets like this
about this time of year
Cries under Christmas lights and
wipes her tears with a missletoe kiss
She loves me.

It's the most dramatic time of the year
I usually wrap my presents with the utmost care
She says I'm a perfectionist like that
It doesn't really bother me, and I just stay serene
sorta like that manger scene.
Everyone stares at for years at the little Babe
until it gets put back into a box in the attic on New Years day

I ponder sometimes, and I just can't seem to get into the spirit,
and the egg nog gets harder and harder to swallow.
I begged her not to leave me this Christmas.
She promised to stay, and not go back home until after my birthday.

The smell of wreathes and Christmas candy fills the kitchen, along with
the jingling of the bells just above the doorway. She hands me a cup of
Christmas cheer just before I leave the room

I staggered out into the snow and
counted the snowmen in the neighborhood,
until she called me back in. I broke an icesickle along the way.

"If we make it through December..."
Plays on the radio while
We made some early Christmas love, it is a never-ending cycle.
It all started on December 4th over a broken candy cane,
I only broke it to give her the bigger half.
It's those little things
that she doesn't quite grasp.
I give her the universe and I only expect a galaxy or two.
She will come around, and I wander from room to room
until I find her in the basement, wrapping up a present. She smiled and
gave me half of her candy cane.

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:24 pm

"I give her the universe and only expect a galaxy or two"

christ that's an amazing line, the rest was dope, but that line is just on some other shit.

PoetryInMotion · Post by **PoetryInMotion** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:36 pm

Nice

Nowell's Soul · Post by **Nowell's Soul** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 8:11 pm

Hotness, I'm diggin this.

PHRO 1 · Post by **PHRO 1** » Tue Dec 21, 2004 10:10 pm

well i hate christmas , and i also think relationships are evil, so i wasnt feeling it

The Frankest · Post by **The Frankest** » Wed Dec 22, 2004 8:37 am

Awesome poem, remixture. Much enjoyed.

Mike (NJJ) · Post by **Mike (NJJ)** » Wed Dec 22, 2004 8:36 pm

Great Christmas poem.

Kid B · Post by **Kid B** » Thu Dec 23, 2004 1:03 am

Dope drop remix. A very nice Christmas piece. One thing, icesickle is some guy who posts at philaflava, you want icicle.

Kilgore786 · Post by **Kilgore786** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 5:12 am

I pop-lock while poppin locks
Bottle rocket prophets try to cop the shit that will make you cough
Cop

Mike (NJJ) · Post by **Mike (NJJ)** » Fri Dec 24, 2004 4:33 pm

You are in the same league as hired gun and that is a good thing. I still need to check that audio of yours and a Christmas Eve at work might be a good time.

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Sat Dec 25, 2004 12:28 am

shits sick

arlene · Post by **arlene** » Sat Dec 25, 2004 9:10 am

:rockon:

The Frankest · Post by **The Frankest** » Sun Dec 26, 2004 5:16 pm

:shock:

Funky rhyme scheme, crazy flow and good content.

This is so dope to read from you, man. You've been stepping it up very well lately.

Massive props in ya pocket.

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Mon Dec 27, 2004 12:16 pm

good shit, lookin forward to whatever project youre puttin together

Magneto · Post by **Magneto** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 12:10 am

You dudes, better stay out the cut like a film crew
On the real duke, you paralyzed style, you dont even feel you
Kill you for what, you niggaz gone stay in cold silence
Cause niggaz only get to act once like show pilots
For they know violence, copying styles who you gonna be today
From the BK show you how I get foul like instant replays
You Green Day, wack raps claiming you human crack
I must be herion, cause mine show up on tracks
You cats better find a different vocation, or location
Cause these doctored raps gonna lead to more patients
I put oxes to faces, when I smoke blacks like racists
You getting ass is baseless, you the fakest
You don't even get to lickher/liquor, you just a chaser
Make ya in awe, while I give my-self a pat on the back like Ty Law

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 4:09 am

:shock:

The Iron Sheik · Post by **The Iron Sheik** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 4:20 am

Motherfuckers step up, I'll impair your whole team||
And leave their futures blacker than airport employees||
Mask on like Voorhees, we'll tear through your vestibule||
And pounce,

Magneto · Post by **Magneto** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 12:21 pm

[quote="The Iron Sheik"]Motherfuckers step up, I'll impair your whole team||
And leave their futures blacker than airport employees||
Mask on like Voorhees, we'll tear through your vestibule||
And pounce,

Mo Cheeks · Post by **Mo Cheeks** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 1:50 pm

Magneto wrote:||

A, I treat this dude like Tyronne Lue
Shoot directly in your face, then walk right over you

:idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot:

damn dawg you bit that line somethin serious

Magneto · Post by **Magneto** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 2:06 pm

Moe Cheeks wrote:
Magneto wrote:||
A, I treat this dude like Tyronne Lue
Shoot directly in your face, then walk right over you

:idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot:

damn dawg you bit that line somethin serious

????? That's one of my old lines....

Mo Cheeks · Post by **Mo Cheeks** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 2:08 pm

Magneto wrote:
Moe Cheeks wrote:
Magneto wrote:||
A, I treat this dude like Tyronne Lue
Shoot directly in your face, then walk right over you

:idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot:

damn dawg you bit that line somethin serious
????? That's one of my old lines....

my bad you might even be the same cat that I read this from one time over at Sohh.com

my fault

remixture · Post by **remixture** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 2:36 pm

Thanks for peepin' this, y'all.

PHRO 1 · Post by **PHRO 1** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 2:45 pm

: :jumpfire: :jumpfire: :mrgreen:

Magneto · Post by **Magneto** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 4:17 pm

Moe Cheeks wrote:
Magneto wrote:
Moe Cheeks wrote:
Magneto wrote:||
A, I treat this dude like Tyronne Lue
Shoot directly in your face, then walk right over you

:idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot: :idiot:

damn dawg you bit that line somethin serious
????? That's one of my old lines....
my bad you might even be the same cat that I read this from one time over at Sohh.com

my fault

You mean Mr. Sam? That's me...

CTR LEGACY THREAD

Re: Thugs What.........STFU

A Broken Candy Cane

My girls gives the best licks

Challenging Anybody to a cipher....