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oh, and thanx a bunch to all you for looking. far too kind.

Peeping Tom wrote:

Kid B wrote:Guess who's coming to dinner?
The ghost of Yul Brenner haggard from the winter
And he's rappin karaoke with Clu and LaLa
Some big band swing version of Big Poppa

Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matza
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho

Like a misguided rancher or angry farmer
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave

u is nicer. it seems more convenient, more egalitarian.

i and u are equal.
i and you are not equal.
how i see it anyway.
i coulda said i and i, like a rasta huh?

RacquetballGangsta wrote:u is nicer. it seems more convenient, more egalitarian.

i and u are equal.
i and you are not equal.
how i see it anyway.
i coulda said i and i, like a rasta huh?

Ahh, I see now. Creative. Super cool fantastic!

Oh yes, I'm not trying to call you all jerks. The little comments I uess are nice, I shouldn't expect some freaking essays. You're right. Thanks just for reading.

HopeLess wrote:Just got aroudn to checking this, it was really dope to me, and I think spoken aloud, in a slam type of situation it would rock right.

Yeah, you do have a point. I think ifthis poem was read right in a slam-type of situation by the poet it could rock! But the beat isn't quite as inherant when you just read the words on the page. I'm sure if the poet read it in the rhythm he intended it it could be real swell.

I thought I replied to this...........anyway, NICEEE

I wasn't mocking

you were mocking everybody when you said nobody can comprehend those big words in the poem

i even said it was pretty good

Peeping Tom wrote:I wasn't mocking

you were mocking everybody when you said nobody can comprehend those big words in the poem

i even said it was pretty good

Um, apparently you don't understand what mocking really is.

I was not mocking people when I said that, I was straight up insulting them. Some people have shown me I was wrong about my impressions of what they said, but you have not. You NEVER said it was good, infact you said it was "hogwash" and it sucked (I'm not stupid enough to not scroll up and check dumbass). Asshole.

theaggravatedjew wrote:

Peeping Tom wrote:

Kid B wrote:Guess who's coming to dinner?
The ghost of Yul Brenner haggard from the winter
And he's rappin karaoke with Clu and LaLa
Some big band swing version of Big Poppa

Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matza
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho

Like a misguided rancher or angry farmer
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave

Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma rays
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's

up

How about something with food in it? It's got food references throughout...maybe something chowder? That's probably wack, but chowder came to mind.

I really fuckin' like this.

Whenever I can't think of a title for something, I just use the first line of the piece ("I miss you").

Nowell's Soul wrote:I really fuckin' like this.

Whenever I can't think of a title for something, I just use the first line of the piece ("I miss you").

I dunno dude, something about that refrain softens it up too much.
The food theme Jen pointed out makes sense the more I ponder it. There was a food commonality we shared through the relationship, she and I both cooked for each other, and we used to have long talks at a diner we went to at the time right around the corner from the apt I lived at.

Kid B wrote:

theaggravatedjew wrote:

Peeping Tom wrote:

Kid B wrote:Guess who's coming to dinner?
The ghost of Yul Brenner haggard from the winter
And he's rappin karaoke with Clu and LaLa
Some big band swing version of Big Poppa

Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matza
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho

Like a misguided rancher or angry farmer
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave

Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma rays
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's

an a ,b or c , i drop the freshest mc to his knees
humble a muther fucker then burn em some trees,
lifes got a thousand doors clouded by killer bees
an dem grades never mattered cuz i struggled just for d's/

jezebel

Sweet September

THE GOLDEN STRING wrote:

Kid B wrote:

theaggravatedjew wrote:

Peeping Tom wrote:

Kid B wrote:Guess who's coming to dinner?
The ghost of Yul Brenner haggard from the winter
And he's rappin karaoke with Clu and LaLa
Some big band swing version of Big Poppa

Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matza
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho

Like a misguided rancher or angry farmer
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave

Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma rays
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's

an a ,b or c , i drop the freshest mc to his knees
humble a muther fucker then burn em some trees,
lifes got a thousand doors clouded by killer bees
an dem grades never mattered cuz i struggled just for d's/

Never strugglin for D's, I blot my eyes and cross my knees in lotus stance seating
Karmic meditation, a presentation of a known advance fleeting
I'm so ill I did a kegstand at an A.A. meeting
While elders took turns shaking hands during the greetings

Cash Rulz wrote:Sweet September

Taken into consideration, cuz I dig the alliteration.

Kid B wrote:

THE GOLDEN STRING wrote:

Kid B wrote:

theaggravatedjew wrote:

Peeping Tom wrote: Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matza
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho

Like a misguided rancher or angry farmer
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave

Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma rays
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's

an a ,b or c , i drop the freshest mc to his knees
humble a muther fucker then burn em some trees,
lifes got a thousand doors clouded by killer bees
an dem grades never mattered cuz i struggled just for d's/

Never strugglin for D's, I blot my eyes and cross my knees in lotus stance seating
Karmic meditation, a presentation of a known advance fleeting
I'm so ill I did a kegstand at an A.A. meeting
While elders took turns shaking hands during the greetings

handshake greetings leave the ancient elders hands bleeding
most the world starving while the rich are overeating,
we dont learn from the past words if we stop reading
people are bout to blow , straight over heating/

THE GOLDEN STRING wrote:

Kid B wrote:

THE GOLDEN STRING wrote:

Kid B wrote:

theaggravatedjew wrote: Like a misguided rancher or angry farmer
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave

Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma rays
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's

an a ,b or c , i drop the freshest mc to his knees
humble a muther fucker then burn em some trees,
lifes got a thousand doors clouded by killer bees
an dem grades never mattered cuz i struggled just for d's/

Never strugglin for D's, I blot my eyes and cross my knees in lotus stance seating
Karmic meditation, a presentation of a known advance fleeting
I'm so ill I did a kegstand at an A.A. meeting
While elders took turns shaking hands during the greetings

handshake greetings leave the ancient elders hands bleeding
most the world starving while the rich are overeating,
we dont learn from the past words if we stop reading
people are bout to blow , straight over heating/

I put a bitch on her knees overheat like tweet
Squash beef make gravy, potatoes and meat
A creep with the 5th comin down 6th street
take you to 7th heaven for that 8th of weed

heed warning , i smoked an 8th of weed this morning
before this thoughts lay dormant
homes raided due to punk ass informants
cops hassle me allways as if i had a warrent /

aint done with this, but i need (honest and rigorous) criticism and comments on it, if u'd please. i know its long, so i dont anticipate much of a response...but hear it go:




Dear nikki
To the beautiful one

Are you genuinely interested in me
The way I am in you
Or are you just being nice
Are u being charitable

You possess the depth the spiritual and emotional depth
The mystery and complexity
I feel as though I could spend the whole of my life getting to know every bit of you
Always learning something new and exciting from you

I feel I could do the same for you.

Do you feel that I could? Are u wary of that possibility? Is that why you might keep me at a distance? Not seem to interested

Holy shit. That thing is huge.

I will read this when I get a chance, tho, skimmed through it, and it seemed fresh.

Weren't you the thug the judge issued a warrant to?
And the cops knocked on your co-op and stormed through
Found a thousand pounds of Peruvian in processed mounds
They took you southbound to downtown to the lost and found

chrysanthemums in silence
an amputated linus
the finest of osirus' suns
the fight for fire's just begun
born in caves of rituals
to remain depraved's habitual
insidious and tricky gets
the right to bite a bitch in bed
a systematic accident
that plots the death of axioms
a cat that laughs at master plans
from fences barbed with happenstance
she slobs the head in nasty fun
and leaves your shaft a catcus butt
you dry and crack so indiscreetly
is justice trying to trick or treat me?

Kid B wrote:Weren't you the thug the judge issued a warrant to?
And the cops knocked on your co-op and stormed through
Found a thousand pounds of Peruvian in processed mounds
They took you southbound to downtown to the lost and found

I WAS LOST BUT NOW IM FOUND
COPS GOT NOTHIN ,CUZ I HIDE THE DOPE IN THE GROUND
I WAS HELD FO 12 HOURS NOW IM BULOVARD BOUND
I DONT CARE WHAT THE WITNESS SAW HE WONT MAKE A SOUND/

PHRO1 wrote:

Kid B wrote:Weren't you the thug the judge issued a warrant to?
And the cops knocked on your co-op and stormed through
Found a thousand pounds of Peruvian in processed mounds
They took you southbound to downtown to the lost and found

I WAS LOST BUT NOW IM FOUND
COPS GOT NOTHIN ,CUZ I HIDE THE DOPE IN THE GROUND
I WAS HELD FO 12 HOURS NOW IM BULOVARD BOUND
I DONT CARE WHAT THE WITNESS SAW HE WONT MAKE A SOUND/

I duct tape his mouth shut
steal the jewels laci peterson his spouse up
we some foul fucks goons on the move
while ya'll some faggots like ravishin rick rude

wow, i appreciate it man, im still around....just finished recording on a group album (Slept On Fam: Audio Crack)....hopefully some of yall will check out....will be about 22-23 tracks, guest verses from AthenA, Warbux, Sheisty Crooks & Estee Nack

sleptonfam.com is up but not officially open to the public until we are ready to sell CD's, but you can go there and check out two streaming album tracks....read about us...check out news on the shit weve been doing...lots of big mixtapes...DVD, Video Game...etc..

but yeah, i definitely appreciate you showing love! i'll be promoting heavy once the shit is done....july should be pressed and ready for sale.

Attitude is at a new latitude
Cats act or react with a lack of gratitude
I clap back at dudes who act the fool at shows
They either packin dro or mackin hoes that have wack clothes