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Mr Otherworldly
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Post by Mr Otherworldly »

oops double post
Last edited by Mr Otherworldly on Fri Oct 07, 2005 4:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
SING THIS SONG WHEN IM GONE.........

Mr Otherworldly
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Post by Mr Otherworldly »

you jest surely and probably dress girlie
out of necessity like the rest you'll mostly likely fold early
i expose cold shoulders, not particular fond of showin mercy
known for decimating whole squads and decapitating clergy
a vampire captain who forever remains blood thirsty
rehashed backlash aimed squarely @ the boards greatest treasure
an old nemesis returns
with lousy stanzas still staying stale as ever
in truth he's a truly tired bum
needs an adviser in his corner to beg him "would you please just retire son "?
shots as harmless as the shitty six-shooter they were originally fired from
past life pal, it's got be hired gun
get at least an A for effort
but receive a failing grade when i tally up the total "dopeness" sum
i love comparisons
otherworld's an upscale country manor and gun's a piss drenched urban slum
the new name has nothing to do with hiding anything, just call it a reinvention
coming back onto scene to murder mercenaries was my sole intention
SING THIS SONG WHEN IM GONE.........

hired gun
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Post by hired gun »

oh bore the gun metaphor, not the hired bum again?
or the fired hun, or some tired um, I say whatever friend
u should tend more to your multi's and your many
personalities, or the reincarnation of carrotz will
face a second casualty,
now the gun against the carrotz is a demon vs van helsing,
the hell I bring is telling , vampires burn and witches melting
a shelling from the howitzer sends otherworldly to the otherside
the coward pulled a Mr. ripley behind personas carrotz hides,
But not even as cunning, stunning but certainly for the buffing
add up the split characters still is adding up to nothing
crushing ids and ego's we know otherworldly's feeble
Fuax Dr. Evil act he's pulling really isn't lethal
one of the original village people, but didn't make the final cut
Got too drunk off of the spunk, and loved too much the bottoms up
So what to do but maybe fool some heads into believing that
rockin mics was easy, and he was giving not receiving, sad that no one
will be grieving for your charred out rotting corpse---in this hearing
you get rejected here quicker then Robert Bork
HIRED GUN-Straight Organics
http://www.freshrootsmusic.com

mongo
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little monkey boy

Post by mongo »

AKA dont do drugs near mics


[hook]-little monkey boooooooooooy (for like 4 bars)

(DC3)
little monkey boy why must you
do what you do
destroy the few good things which were given to you
if i was gibbon i'd have given you a ploy to choose
nothin less than a mammal
but your still just an animal, a fuckin cannibal
killin off your own kind
indeed you dont bleed you make people bleed
a seed planted
grew like a weed amongst the others
why must you heed the reaper in your louis vatton leathers
so clever
livin off the land in the fuckin forest
your eyes on the man please let me explore this
reasoning behind your murderous sensations
you must love the blood tastin
im chasin you through past through the trees
but you wont leave DC
stuck on my back while i stroll thru society
its your fault that they blamed me
i didnt do a damn thing
little monkey boy please leave

(mongo)
little monkey boy please believe me
if i had opposable toes the trees would greet me too
they'd be
pleased to meet me
you
dont understand
little monkey boy id swing so freely til i found that land
til i found the hand that raised you
and made you so hateful
little monkey boy did they berate you?
was it in grade school?
top hat's on backwards
did they make you play the fool?
did they give you a fez and two cymbals
a set of suspenders
some keds
and let you dance for nickels
did they point and laugh screamin "hes too little"
throwin those nickels back and forth
playin you in the middle
little monkey boy, this is a mini fiddle
moanin fifty skittle salutes
at those that been belittled and shoot
and take offensive action when they laughin at em
be the bigger little monkey boy
get the balls to relax

[hook]

(DC3)
twelve monkeys standin in a line
with a look of wrecking things behind they eyes
a citys demise
now what do you see
the liberty statue underneath the beach

(mongo)
but im a motherfuckin sapien
a monkeys uncle
yo fuck your jungle
we humans would love to jump you
they sit on stools droolin at your lovely lies
i sit on back crackin brews
watch the monkey shine
your mind speaks in mono, mono
loco, automated ape ill cake you in guano
your monkey business is laughin and displacin nations
we dont say shit
cause paul frank made you famous paintin...

(DC3)
a sock replica made to look just like you
the ultimate fanbase, an infinite life too
oh no now they got you packin heat
rollerblades, dungarees in the streets
puffin weed
have you ever seen such a glimmer shimmerin for the simian breed
repeat
have you ever seen such a glimmer shimmerin for the simian breed

[hook]

SeaTownBlues
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Post by SeaTownBlues »

hey it is KRS THUN

Gut Frozen
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Post by Gut Frozen »

gums tightenin, recedin
them words there startle me silly. a receding gumline is #1 on my long list of fears. i'm constantly licking my teeth and checking for daily disintegration along the gum front. but creeping up on my list is the rapid growth expansion of the human robot.

your work is always splendid, you know that. so i feel dumb saying it.


Stay quick on the draw,
Gut still Frozen
All I'm asking is to die in your arms.

Davis Lester
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Post by Davis Lester »

SeaTownBlues wrote:hey it is KRS THUN
Yep. dope.

remixture
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Post by remixture »

good read

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Post by HopeLess »

Ill drop HG.

Mr Otherworldly
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Post by Mr Otherworldly »

gun's like that fellow jack horner
quietly sulking in the corner
bored out of his skull with his own drivel
trying to beg chrome to loan him a cool persona
but im not that wacky bitch Sybil
find a spectacularly gruesome method to kill ya
because i'm not in any way what you would call "civil"
sensational in every syllable my syntax simply sizzles
you really wanna trade punches?
im the global sheriff and im imposing a new tariff
i'll see to it that you get fucked over more
than a certain slutty hotel chain heiress named Paris
im absolutely ruthless and efficient
a brand new take on the premise of being vicious
the importance of being earnest
fucking with a six star general
you're just trying to earn a learners permit
I drop
literature littered with little to no limitation
that alone sparks jealousy or immediate imitation
a dope showman showin no signs of slumping or ever slowin
pro shogun prone to crushing old foes with the most superb slogans
SING THIS SONG WHEN IM GONE.........

foiegras
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every post is the next post

Post by foiegras »

The industrial fossils that pull out your tonsils and return bottles to recycling plants wrapped up in your conveyer belt sarcophagus with mummies draped in Charmin that let salamanders crawl over the pore villages with more cylinders

More octagon carpenter bee jigsaws per hectare
Like we savor every Ito En droplet even if the kismet Powerball is the dowry in your backyard waterfall where landscaping geniuses pillage local quarries and ravines for the last mojito mixer
It

Kid B
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Post by Kid B »

Language is a strange fish that occupies many bowls
We watch on our plasma screens the lies they are told
It's not propaganda when you take a proper gander
It's corporate talking heads spreading an agenda thru fodder banter

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Re: where you left off

Post by Kid B »

hired gun wrote: what's left of my youth I won't waste in the booth
emaciate my brain, body down to the tooth
and nail I scratch a small patch of earth I can save
for a six inch shallow grave,and bury these dead feelings
Hurry the dreads peeling away soft anatomy parts
I'm sealin off the exits that lead to my heart
this sequence right here is just too fresh for words
dope writing, ha

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The Roses

Post by Kid B »

Let's get right down to business
What is this
Dizziness spinning infinities intrinsic
Colors flourish in forests
But the sidewalks stay cracked
You have to stay back
And watch your step
Or take your last breath
Pac said roses can grow from the concrete
But the roots are sometimes incomplete underneath
We've undermined the streets and left it apart from nature
Littered with lit cigarettes and discounts on pagers
Horns honk hard and commerce disperses
Adorned with a metrocard, Converse and shirtless
Everybody knows what's hot in the streets but kids don't know the streets is hot
You get got for what you got
Might have to sell the shirt off your back
To get by
We get high and cloud up the stress
To drown out the rest
The best is sure to come you just stand clear of the closing doors
And watch the roses grow more and realize the doors are open more

Mr Otherworldly
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Post by Mr Otherworldly »

a distinct shift in style? tell me if im wrong.....did you try something new here?
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hired gun
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Post by hired gun »

Mr Otherworldly wrote:gun's like that fellow jack horner
quietly sulking in the corner
bored out of his skull with his own drivel
trying to beg chrome to loan him a cool persona
but im not that wacky bitch Sybil
find a spectacularly gruesome method to kill ya
because i'm not in any way what you would call "civil"
sensational in every syllable my syntax simply sizzles
you really wanna trade punches?
im the global sheriff and im imposing a new tariff
i'll see to it that you get fucked over more
than a certain slutty hotel chain heiress named Paris
im absolutely ruthless and efficient
a brand new take on the premise of being vicious
the importance of being earnest
fucking with a six star general
you're just trying to earn a learners permit
I drop
literature littered with little to no limitation
that alone sparks jealousy or immediate imitation
a dope showman showin no signs of slumping or ever slowin
pro shogun prone to crushing old foes with the most superb slogans
Guns takin a shot at it, carrotz character is worthless
otherworldly in the sense that its his alternate for nerdiness
never concerned with this effeminate remnant of a sonnet pillow biter
poet writer vs a street fighter, you can't trade punches with a lifer
no more of your psuedo intelligence, your psuedonym ain't even relevant
YOU was chrome carrotz and now at best a footnote reference
Ms's O's appearance is a funny site at best
We killed the carrotz once, let's put the otherworld to rest
So let's keep it to the facts you're a vaudville sideshow act
So wack an assumed name the only way that you could come back
and as far as that's concerned seems its hard for you to learn
that you should take the L been to the well just one too many times
So in all your pretty lines, with their flowery disposition
in a room full of people you're the only one who listens
ON a board full of posters, you're the only one who looks in
Consider this charity for your parody that I grace your compositions
The votes are in, your throats been cut, along with tired rhymes
you've been washed up, we know your but, the chrome's been lost its shine.
HIRED GUN-Straight Organics
http://www.freshrootsmusic.com

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Poem: Why I still Try to love

Post by theaggravatedjew »

My relationships are caterpillars that dont go through metamorphosis
I try to feed them correctly but I

360
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Post by 360 »

YES. SORRY. I will post something.

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Post by 360 »

It just goes to show how long I haven't been here by the tardiness of my reply.


FYI. I deleted the stickies due to no progress. We will re-do them in a more organized fashion.

360
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OH SHIT, I just noticed that 9 pages is the limit..

Post by 360 »

Is there anyway we could bring up some old joints I dropped in here from way back? I planned to use a couple of things. If not, no worries, they were typed up freestyles anyway so they will die in the same fashion as spitten freestyles.

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Post by Gut Frozen »

foiegras' work always nestles in the dark cracks of my mind like a lyme-infected tick into the skin of an unsuspecting human host.

i much enjoy your cerebral anoxia brand of writing. and for some odd reason it springs to mind this quote:
All I'm asking is to die in your arms.

SeaTownBlues
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Post by SeaTownBlues »

[quote="Gut Frozen"]foiegras' work always nestles in the dark cracks of my mind like a lyme-infected tick into the skin of an unsuspecting human host.

i much enjoy your cerebral anoxia brand of writing. and for some odd reason it springs to mind this quote:

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Post by Kid B »

This quite possibly is a different format from mr. gras. I dig it though, the approach is strong and the imagery seems to flow in and through the convolutions of my mind with a strong rhyme scheme that isn't forced, good work sir.

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Post by Kid B »

heh. I didn't realize the pad was compromised like that.

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Post by HopeLess »

Kid B wrote:heh. I didn't realize the pad was compromised like that.
Squid said that he has them all saved to his harddrive. he just hasn't posted them back yet.

I made a sticky of this I though...

EDIT:Nevermind, just read your post, no biggie.

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Post by HopeLess »

im diggin this a-jew...funny thing...i wrote a poem with a catepillar theme type deal in it too recently...i will post it.

anyways props doggie.

Peeping Tom
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Post by Peeping Tom »

shoot at you with hallows take off your fuckin jack o lantern
big chains ice skate blow holes through rings of saturn
mad man asylum, damn bum, handcuffed locked in a cage
rhymes like beepers ya'll know who hit the page

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Post by Aethetical-Hades »

[quote]It

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Post by Gut Frozen »

you two should put your caterpillars in a controlled environment and see if they'll mate.
and if you should decide to do so, and it is a success, can i have one of their offspring as my own? it sure gets lonely here in the figment of nightwalker

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Post by Gut Frozen »

right from the first line i knew i was in for a treat. and boy! you picked the right month for it. i was trying to take quality care of my teeth but they just had to be fully sunken into this cerebral cake.

take care of your person, and steer clear of soviet werewolves. They

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