CTR LEGACY THREAD

Gut Frozen · Post by **Gut Frozen** » Wed Oct 12, 2005 6:48 pm

not so fast...i see potential for a smash board game here. Are you free Wednesday

foiegras · Post by **foiegras** » Wed Oct 12, 2005 6:53 pm

i think someone shoul start a forum just for Gut Frozen responses. i've actually started augmenting my rhymes with aforthought to how Mr. Frozen is going to respond.

I kind of changed up my steeze here, defeintly structurally, as far as how it's worded. It also probabaly comes off a little more S of C then usual. I wrote this while wrapping airconditioning duct in insulation, inbetween box cutter swipes. It's so intrinsic...

Gut Frozen · Post by **Gut Frozen** » Wed Oct 12, 2005 6:56 pm

What did I do to deserve this? I guess donating my snow cone machine for the use of my area schools has put me in karma

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Wed Oct 12, 2005 7:25 pm

thanks for the words, looking forward to checking that hope

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Wed Oct 12, 2005 7:29 pm

bummer, sometimes i forget what ive posted and what to check and see if i already did.

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Wed Oct 12, 2005 7:32 pm

Pac said roses can grow from the concrete
But the roots are sometimes incomplete underneath
We've undermined the streets and left it apart from nature
Littered with lit cigarettes and discounts on pagers

I really like the piece and those bars in particular. More drops fucker. Stay up.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Wed Oct 12, 2005 10:24 pm

Suid juts let me know that he does in fact have al the threads backed up, he's just trying to figure out how to do it the best way and has come up on some complications...Just thought I'd let y'all know, we haven't beem forgotten.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Wed Oct 12, 2005 10:25 pm

So ill...another banger, deceptively straight forward...your work packs so much impact and weight...I love it.

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 1:41 am

Mos def, feelin this one yo...Stay up

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 1:43 am

Inspiring, this piece is the shizznit...On a felt tip, no doubt

[quote]One day the caterpillar will survive through all of life

oracle21 · Post by **oracle21** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 3:53 am

nice, good detail

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 4:30 am

Why do skinny chicks always think they

ANT8U · Post by **ANT8U** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 4:44 am

so was she good?

hired gun · Post by **hired gun** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 12:52 pm

damn....girl diss in battle form

. Hot as always.

hired gun · Post by **hired gun** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 12:53 pm

damn....girl diss in battle form

. Hot as always.

thefiend5 · Post by **thefiend5** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 8:15 pm

up on this page steady illin
lookin to live life in the humble!!!
not carin about 1million
attention enet emceez
go up against the 5 an catch a computer freeze/

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Thu Oct 13, 2005 8:39 pm

I rap in binary code
and Burberry coats
A fashionable geek
use emoticons to speak

I

on

no not the

you know me im that

jew
from the state of

Bitch what it do

to me im not :blaowarrow: at all

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 3:41 am

feelin this. some parts were corny yet dope...lol such as

I want your divided attention, half on me and the other half staring into space like an opium-crazed dog.

anyway...keep doin it, mane. some freshness in here....peace

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 3:42 am

your a sick fucker.

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 3:50 am

SeaTownBlues wrote:hey it is KRS THUN

lol..serious..the only person that could make THIS shit rhyme:

Timeless applebum sweaters just means we blood brothers
linking old trails of tears to Katrina's floodwaters

that shit dont rhyme in any kind of english ive ever heard of...lol

but i liked this:

"If a-like be alike, U-N-I see cobra beasts
retreat from live globe Amphitheatre Lower East
Code of da streetz: baretta shine through leather parkas"

and

"Think you Escobar size?
Ethnic cleansing spics spans to ghetto apartheid"

dope.

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 4:37 am

every verse is parasitic
the exact spaces he claims to make base in, be exactly where he isnt
there's something very apparent hidden in every daring ball bearing his larynx's spittin
there isnt a prison that could tear him from sharing his vision, nor a stool pigeon's perfection to parrot his rhythm

so this blasphemous twit
did what happier kids
did in attics when fishin with cast away threads
of a grandad whose dead for a madhatter's head
beneath that madhat where the average is bred.
law of averages says that it has to be there
one time when his line dips within sight of his hair
with each try he's denied so he cries and he swears
he's as bright as the guy there beside tony blair.

scientists would go mad for what savages know,
when that gasket'll blow, when that casket'll show
at your door and four friends with this sadness bestowed
hold a firefly basket that's magic aglow for a widow aggrieved and bedraggled to tow
on her way through the forest in search of a faucet,
follow songs of the chorus as her hearing gets lost, its
the watertight logic that's porous in fact and the hermit crab's happier for it.
sure its a slap in the face when youngbloods are embraced by the fact that the act of reporting
the facts is exactly in fact what distorts what was black
and was white, when printed in white and in black
and the whites and the blacks all with knives in their backs
will look back on the past and ignore it
and fall back on their backs to absorb it
the deathblow they so slowly and sweetly had courted.

Gut Frozen · Post by **Gut Frozen** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 1:49 pm

some just like their women to have a strong spine and an empty mind. that's all...nice little doozy, boozy storyline. love it like lace.

your beaming truckstop whorehouse cocktail waitress,
Gut Frozen

Aethetical-Hades · Post by **Aethetical-Hades** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 3:21 pm

A good read....how ironic though, at the same time that I'm reading this I'm bumping "See You Soon" by Ceschi....perfect timing...keep this up and stay blessed...

Aethetical-Hades · Post by **Aethetical-Hades** » Fri Oct 14, 2005 3:25 pm

The use of internal and broken-rhyme in this piece is unbelievable...I don't know how you do it....even I have difficult "controlling" those two schemes--sometimes....

Keep this up and stay blessed...my fellow Okayplayer....

Gut Frozen · Post by **Gut Frozen** » Sat Oct 15, 2005 4:52 am

Gut Frozen Presents: The Yearbook Photo

I knew all this rigmarole reminded me of something...and lo and behold; here it is

Davis Lester · Post by **Davis Lester** » Sat Oct 15, 2005 11:54 am

Rambling and incoherent.

hired gun · Post by **hired gun** » Sat Oct 15, 2005 12:45 pm

classic material...

Aethetical-Hades · Post by **Aethetical-Hades** » Sat Oct 15, 2005 3:45 pm

Use your math--the weight of this mental is supermass and solar masses collapsing when my shoulders feel the inconvenient-colder...shuttle off faster on a lunar path as I visually consume the moon you're after

Planetary aligned, and spin retrograde like God out of line--and Its Mind...regardless of magnitude if attitude comes at an all-time high altitude, swallowed-up wholly entered into 'em

Time-walking in-and-out of this clockwork millennium as NASA finances continental entities with the resemblance of Minutemen eminence minus the militant that was swapped-out significant with Master Universe Amphibians

Conflicts contradict theorists idealistics when astronauts with naught a thought unaware of a care for their existence--when it's confronted by innerspace acolytes hurling bolides against American Home pride

Direct descendants of Earthly Kindred commence soul-kissin' for those Moms-and-Dads missin', lost in that Black distance...

Now, aback to terra firma on your Planet where feet are firmly planted, deeply rooted raping Mother Nature's open-cavity...the legs of your flesh are now, actually, considered in the sight of Overgod as a double-shafted penis inserted gradually due to inverted gravity

Soundwave absurd cursed
volunteer rocket nuisance
more problems for Houston

Thun · Post by **Thun** » Sat Oct 15, 2005 5:14 pm

RacquetballGangsta wrote:
SeaTownBlues wrote:hey it is KRS THUN
lol..serious..the only person that could make THIS shit rhyme:

Timeless applebum sweaters just means we blood brothers
linking old trails of tears to Katrina's floodwaters

that shit dont rhyme in any kind of english ive ever heard of...lol

but i liked this:

"If a-like be alike, U-N-I see cobra beasts
retreat from live globe Amphitheatre Lower East
Code of da streetz: baretta shine through leather parkas"

and

"Think you Escobar size?
Ethnic cleansing spics spans to ghetto apartheid"

dope.

I know that you feel a need to point this out in every single rhyme I post, going so far in the past to claim that words that have been rhymed on countless well known and repeated songs by the likes of Rakim and Run DMC don't rhyme, so I'm gonna drop a little science on ya. It's called an accent - people in different parts of the country speak differently. In cali, they say "Waaaaaaaaterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr", but in the northeast in urban areas people say something that sounds more like "wuttah" and for brother it comes out more like "brudda." It's just a fact of life you might have to get accustomed to.

Thanks for the feedback.

360 · Post by **360** » Sat Oct 15, 2005 5:45 pm

I'm excited. I never thought I would see this day again.

CTR LEGACY THREAD

and I tried

overtures to a slow steady decline

How To Be A Humanistic Black Hole....