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what up, first post here. just wanted to intro myself with a beat or two...

my beat, my buddy jason spitting one verse at the beginning, funny cat ( shitty mic ;/ ):
http://www.justdesign.org/temp/jayandmo ... apiece.mp3

my beat, jason again, shitty mic, again:
http://www.justdesign.org/temp/jayandmor_thirdrate.mp3

got lots more, those are just 2 quick jams to show for now.

oh and here's just a chill beat, maybe for an intro or something:
http://www.justdesign.org/temp/mor_fallingideas.mp3

pick at em.

first one, it sounds good. Not sure if the horns really fit in, but the beat is solid. are you supposed to have a second rapper on this or something?

second beat, I don't like the drums. The bass drum is too too high and drowns out the rest of the beat. It's also not really enough to carry the beat. It's need some other melody on it. The levels on this are a off, vocals are way too low. This could be solid, but i think you need to work on it somemore.

third beat, this needs more movement. i like the airy feel to it, but the drums dont' fit it, and there isn't enough to keep the listener interested.

welcome to the sound lab...and philaflava.com. please check out the rules posted here http://www.philaflava.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=18674 and make sure you respond to a few posts so i don't have to lock this, thanks.

thanks for the tips. i agree with a lot of that, all are unfinished.

what up brosef..

you know what i think about sparked a piece. good stuff.

i'm agreeing with illiterate here, pick a different kick, a little lower. def. needs a melody of some sort, too (but i already know you got that little piano riff brewin..)

as far as fdalling ideas, i think it sounds pretty good, but it could use a couple additions (of what i'm not sure)

keep 'em coming, i start recording this weekend. peace.

ha you know it kaleb.

here's another beat i was playin with...

http://www.justdesign.org/temp/mor_postitfix.mp3

needs to be rapped on still, i think kaleb called this one!