trying to find your palate... (mixtape track)

Remo the Great · Post by **Remo the Great** » Fri May 28, 2004 2:43 am

http://www.godamusrhyme.com/audio/tryingtofind.mp3

"Trying to Find Your Palate" lyrics by Godamus Rhyme
(C) 2004 Rhyme Werks (ASCAP)

this is my take on Atmosphere's "Trying to Find a Balance." I did this track as test for my new equipment. As u can hear, the quality is gully. I wish I had had this for the recording of my album. I was so happy with how this turned that I've decided to reinstate plans to do my "Cocky Bastard" mixtape. I had wanted to start this back in december, but decided to kill it cause of quality issues. But now... It's on biyatch!

and just so u all get the hook right in case u cant understand it clearly its:

In the days of Kings and queens, they smoked the best herb/
Had coke for the stars and the rufies for molesters/
I wanna move back and forth in your throat/
I'm tring to find your palate; I'm trying to find your palate//

enjoy.

peace

Remo the Great · Post by **Remo the Great** » Fri May 28, 2004 10:44 pm

can i actually get some written criticism here? come on y'all...

Can-U · Post by **Can-U** » Sat May 29, 2004 12:10 am

its interesting thats for sure

i mean i can tell youre good on it...but the way slugcommands this track makes yours pail a lil bit.

Also, the chorus is a lil off rhythm. But, I like it more then i dont like it. Thats jsut the criticism that i had.

Naught · Post by **Naught** » Sat May 29, 2004 1:05 am

Can-U wrote:the way slugcommands this track makes yours pail a lil bit..

Word. It doesn't help that like 40%-50% of your rhymes here are just flipping Slug's lines, right down to the intro and outro. Basically, I would advise you to scrap this and write something more original over this beat (which is ill), and if you can't to that, choose another instrumental.

TheEnglishProfessorGuy · Sat May 29, 2004 1:12 am

Naught wrote:
Can-U wrote:the way slugcommands this track makes yours pail a lil bit..
Word. It doesn't help that like 40%-50% of your rhymes here are just flipping Slug's lines, right down to the intro and outro. Basically, I would advise you to scrap this and write something more original over this beat (which is ill), and if you can't to that, choose another instrumental.

dude was going for a parody.

he did hella good job.

Remo the Great · Post by **Remo the Great** » Sat May 29, 2004 3:14 am

TheEnglishProfessorGuy wrote:
Naught wrote:
Can-U wrote:the way slugcommands this track makes yours pail a lil bit..
Word. It doesn't help that like 40%-50% of your rhymes here are just flipping Slug's lines, right down to the intro and outro. Basically, I would advise you to scrap this and write something more original over this beat (which is ill), and if you can't to that, choose another instrumental.
dude was going for a parody.

he did hella good job.

yeah. flipping slugs lines around was the point of the whole thing. kinda like when wierd al did "amish paradise"

KaeoFLUX · Post by **KaeoFLUX** » Sat May 29, 2004 4:57 am

not crazy about the track as a whole.. (never heard the atmos shit though)

but I can definately appreciate the production on this. Sounds dope as hell man good job.

k

Naught · Post by **Naught** » Sat May 29, 2004 12:30 pm

Remo the Great wrote:kinda like when wierd al did "amish paradise"

You're not Weird Al caliber, sorry man.

Remo the Great · Post by **Remo the Great** » Sat May 29, 2004 3:33 pm

Naught wrote:
Remo the Great wrote:kinda like when wierd al did "amish paradise"
You're not Weird Al caliber, sorry man.

never claimed to be. i was just having fun.

Hasenfefer · Post by **Hasenfefer** » Sat May 29, 2004 3:44 pm

for fun this was cool...didnt personally feel the intro or hook that much, quality was on though. stay moving.

trying to find your palate... (mixtape track)

Is this dope?

trying to find your palate... (mixtape track)