CTR LEGACY THREAD
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Like a misguided rancher or angry farmerPeeping Tom wrote:Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matzaKid B wrote:Guess who's coming to dinner?
The ghost of Yul Brenner haggard from the winter
And he's rappin karaoke with Clu and LaLa
Some big band swing version of Big Poppa
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave
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Yeah, you do have a point. I think ifthis poem was read right in a slam-type of situation by the poet it could rock! But the beat isn't quite as inherant when you just read the words on the page. I'm sure if the poet read it in the rhythm he intended it it could be real swell.HopeLess wrote:Just got aroudn to checking this, it was really dope to me, and I think spoken aloud, in a slam type of situation it would rock right.
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Um, apparently you don't understand what mocking really is.Peeping Tom wrote:I wasn't mocking
you were mocking everybody when you said nobody can comprehend those big words in the poem
i even said it was pretty good
I was not mocking people when I said that, I was straight up insulting them. Some people have shown me I was wrong about my impressions of what they said, but you have not. You NEVER said it was good, infact you said it was "hogwash" and it sucked (I'm not stupid enough to not scroll up and check dumbass). Asshole.
Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma raystheaggravatedjew wrote:Like a misguided rancher or angry farmerPeeping Tom wrote:Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matzaKid B wrote:Guess who's coming to dinner?
The ghost of Yul Brenner haggard from the winter
And he's rappin karaoke with Clu and LaLa
Some big band swing version of Big Poppa
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's
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I dunno dude, something about that refrain softens it up too much.Nowell's Soul wrote:I really fuckin' like this.
Whenever I can't think of a title for something, I just use the first line of the piece ("I miss you").
The food theme Jen pointed out makes sense the more I ponder it. There was a food commonality we shared through the relationship, she and I both cooked for each other, and we used to have long talks at a diner we went to at the time right around the corner from the apt I lived at.
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Kid B wrote:Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma raystheaggravatedjew wrote:Like a misguided rancher or angry farmerPeeping Tom wrote:Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matzaKid B wrote:Guess who's coming to dinner?
The ghost of Yul Brenner haggard from the winter
And he's rappin karaoke with Clu and LaLa
Some big band swing version of Big Poppa
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's
an a ,b or c , i drop the freshest mc to his knees
humble a muther fucker then burn em some trees,
lifes got a thousand doors clouded by killer bees
an dem grades never mattered cuz i struggled just for d's/
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Never strugglin for D's, I blot my eyes and cross my knees in lotus stance seatingTHE GOLDEN STRING wrote:Kid B wrote:Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma raystheaggravatedjew wrote:Like a misguided rancher or angry farmerPeeping Tom wrote:Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matzaKid B wrote:Guess who's coming to dinner?
The ghost of Yul Brenner haggard from the winter
And he's rappin karaoke with Clu and LaLa
Some big band swing version of Big Poppa
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's
an a ,b or c , i drop the freshest mc to his knees
humble a muther fucker then burn em some trees,
lifes got a thousand doors clouded by killer bees
an dem grades never mattered cuz i struggled just for d's/
Karmic meditation, a presentation of a known advance fleeting
I'm so ill I did a kegstand at an A.A. meeting
While elders took turns shaking hands during the greetings
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handshake greetings leave the ancient elders hands bleedingKid B wrote:Never strugglin for D's, I blot my eyes and cross my knees in lotus stance seatingTHE GOLDEN STRING wrote:Kid B wrote:Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma raystheaggravatedjew wrote:Like a misguided rancher or angry farmerPeeping Tom wrote: Big Poppa spit docta get bread that thick matza
never see me on the streets with dough
strong arm gorilla pimp when i beat a ho
purpose is purple lips i mistreat a ho
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's
an a ,b or c , i drop the freshest mc to his knees
humble a muther fucker then burn em some trees,
lifes got a thousand doors clouded by killer bees
an dem grades never mattered cuz i struggled just for d's/
Karmic meditation, a presentation of a known advance fleeting
I'm so ill I did a kegstand at an A.A. meeting
While elders took turns shaking hands during the greetings
most the world starving while the rich are overeating,
we dont learn from the past words if we stop reading
people are bout to blow , straight over heating/
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I put a bitch on her knees overheat like tweetTHE GOLDEN STRING wrote:handshake greetings leave the ancient elders hands bleedingKid B wrote:Never strugglin for D's, I blot my eyes and cross my knees in lotus stance seatingTHE GOLDEN STRING wrote:Kid B wrote:Flip nexus wave into alpha gamma raystheaggravatedjew wrote: Like a misguided rancher or angry farmer
country and hiphop my john deeres armored
I rep Texas its my home, born and raised
Talk shit and wind up in a shallow texas grave
Ultraviolet auto-Pilot graffin grammar maze
Grandma made some ill carrot cake for days
And my school grades matter if I make all A's
an a ,b or c , i drop the freshest mc to his knees
humble a muther fucker then burn em some trees,
lifes got a thousand doors clouded by killer bees
an dem grades never mattered cuz i struggled just for d's/
Karmic meditation, a presentation of a known advance fleeting
I'm so ill I did a kegstand at an A.A. meeting
While elders took turns shaking hands during the greetings
most the world starving while the rich are overeating,
we dont learn from the past words if we stop reading
people are bout to blow , straight over heating/
Squash beef make gravy, potatoes and meat
A creep with the 5th comin down 6th street
take you to 7th heaven for that 8th of weed
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dear nikki (plus part 2 added 7-9-05)
aint done with this, but i need (honest and rigorous) criticism and comments on it, if u'd please. i know its long, so i dont anticipate much of a response...but hear it go:
Dear nikki
To the beautiful one
Are you genuinely interested in me
The way I am in you
Or are you just being nice
Are u being charitable
You possess the depth the spiritual and emotional depth
The mystery and complexity
I feel as though I could spend the whole of my life getting to know every bit of you
Always learning something new and exciting from you
I feel I could do the same for you.
Do you feel that I could? Are u wary of that possibility? Is that why you might keep me at a distance? Not seem to interested
Dear nikki
To the beautiful one
Are you genuinely interested in me
The way I am in you
Or are you just being nice
Are u being charitable
You possess the depth the spiritual and emotional depth
The mystery and complexity
I feel as though I could spend the whole of my life getting to know every bit of you
Always learning something new and exciting from you
I feel I could do the same for you.
Do you feel that I could? Are u wary of that possibility? Is that why you might keep me at a distance? Not seem to interested
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chrysanthemums in silence
an amputated linus
the finest of osirus' suns
the fight for fire's just begun
born in caves of rituals
to remain depraved's habitual
insidious and tricky gets
the right to bite a bitch in bed
a systematic accident
that plots the death of axioms
a cat that laughs at master plans
from fences barbed with happenstance
she slobs the head in nasty fun
and leaves your shaft a catcus butt
you dry and crack so indiscreetly
is justice trying to trick or treat me?
an amputated linus
the finest of osirus' suns
the fight for fire's just begun
born in caves of rituals
to remain depraved's habitual
insidious and tricky gets
the right to bite a bitch in bed
a systematic accident
that plots the death of axioms
a cat that laughs at master plans
from fences barbed with happenstance
she slobs the head in nasty fun
and leaves your shaft a catcus butt
you dry and crack so indiscreetly
is justice trying to trick or treat me?
I WAS LOST BUT NOW IM FOUNDKid B wrote:Weren't you the thug the judge issued a warrant to?
And the cops knocked on your co-op and stormed through
Found a thousand pounds of Peruvian in processed mounds
They took you southbound to downtown to the lost and found
COPS GOT NOTHIN ,CUZ I HIDE THE DOPE IN THE GROUND
I WAS HELD FO 12 HOURS NOW IM BULOVARD BOUND
I DONT CARE WHAT THE WITNESS SAW HE WONT MAKE A SOUND/
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I duct tape his mouth shutPHRO1 wrote:I WAS LOST BUT NOW IM FOUNDKid B wrote:Weren't you the thug the judge issued a warrant to?
And the cops knocked on your co-op and stormed through
Found a thousand pounds of Peruvian in processed mounds
They took you southbound to downtown to the lost and found
COPS GOT NOTHIN ,CUZ I HIDE THE DOPE IN THE GROUND
I WAS HELD FO 12 HOURS NOW IM BULOVARD BOUND
I DONT CARE WHAT THE WITNESS SAW HE WONT MAKE A SOUND/
steal the jewels laci peterson his spouse up
we some foul fucks goons on the move
while ya'll some faggots like ravishin rick rude
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wow, i appreciate it man, im still around....just finished recording on a group album (Slept On Fam: Audio Crack)....hopefully some of yall will check out....will be about 22-23 tracks, guest verses from AthenA, Warbux, Sheisty Crooks & Estee Nack
sleptonfam.com is up but not officially open to the public until we are ready to sell CD's, but you can go there and check out two streaming album tracks....read about us...check out news on the shit weve been doing...lots of big mixtapes...DVD, Video Game...etc..
but yeah, i definitely appreciate you showing love! i'll be promoting heavy once the shit is done....july should be pressed and ready for sale.
sleptonfam.com is up but not officially open to the public until we are ready to sell CD's, but you can go there and check out two streaming album tracks....read about us...check out news on the shit weve been doing...lots of big mixtapes...DVD, Video Game...etc..
but yeah, i definitely appreciate you showing love! i'll be promoting heavy once the shit is done....july should be pressed and ready for sale.